Tag: first draft

2. “Is everyone gone now?” “Yes, sir,” said MacArthur as he brought some chamomile tea to his employer. Shane looked at the grandfather clock by the books. “Dear God, these people can party.” “Yes, sir.” “Leave this here. Tell the servants to clean up tomorrow. The mess won’t go anywhere.”…

1. Chris Shane entered the ballroom and everyone turned to him. He smiled that bright smile of his, golden locks reflecting the light above him. He stood alone. The host of the party was well-known to be a loner, a man kept to his own eccentricities, and the people who…